Thursday, March 24, 2011
Blog Entry 7: Reflection and Evaluation For my eaasy
After I read the comments that my teammates gave, I found out my introduction did well in my this time essay. My introduction use a short words to summarize the assignment "Hype" and states Kalle Lasn's claim clearly, and also I wrote my claim clearly. Something I need to improve is i did not use my personal exprience as examples.
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Hi Yuanyi:
ReplyDeleteBelow you will find my response for this blog series. This is not a grade, nor is it intended to be read as an evaluation of your performance in this class so far. The evaluation of the blog series may be found in Blackboard in the gradebook for this class and the grade is derived from a totally dofferent method as described in the syllabus. What you will see below is a response to your overall writing as of this blog series. The categories are from the CAT-W evaluation rubric (what the evaluator’s use). The comments below are intended to be both descriptive (what I see) and prescriptive (what you need to work on). I will be speaking with you personally about your current strengths and weakness during class. Please feel free to ask as many questions as you like about the following in class, during office hours, or in our FB groups.
Critical Response to Writing Task and Text: Though you are missing one of the major blogs, from what I see you are responding to the texts well.
Development of Writer’s Ideas: We will work on development some more.
Structure of the Response: We are working on structure now.
Sentences, Word Choice, Grammar, Usage, Mechanics: Some issues, but nothing a little practice won't help.