Today is the first day to come back to school after spring break. After I wrote 11 pieces of essay, I reviewed my essays from 1 to 11. I found that my writting is better than before. I am not nevous anymore when I take the exam. My thoughts is clear, and I can move ahead when I write my paper essays.
I know that it needs a long time for me to improve my writing skill, because English is my second lanuage. I cannot success in a short time. And sometimes I will be too worried about the result of the exam, so there was a period of time that I stoped in a spot so that I cannot move on. In that time I was so sad, but my professor helped me a lot. Now I am be better than before. Throught out my essay, I divide it into three parts to say here. They are the beginning, the body and the ending.
In the beginning of my essay, it is introduction. It is about a short claim which I understand from an assignment. It is hard for me to find the claim of the author, because there are many words in the assignment that I do not know. Therefore, it usually takes me a long time to read an assignment and understand what it say at all. This is I need to improve in my writing.
In the second paragraph of my essay is usually the summary of the assignment. It also belongs to my beginning of my essay. Sometime I did well in this part, but sometimes not. It means that I need to pratice. In the end of this paragraph, I often show my claim to the assignment. And the last sentence I will write a connection to next paragraph.
In the body, I usually wrote my experience directly before. I did not know I need to write a central sentence first in my first sentence. I often skipped this parts, and I did not give the points to explain why I had this claim. Now I know that I need to give at least two points to explain my claim.
In addition, I did not use my personal experience in my essay before. And my tone of my essay, I did not use the first person "I" to write my essay. Now I also know that it is better to use my personal expriences in my exampl and to be a first person to write my opinion.
Furthermore, sometimes I did not connect well between my experience and my claim. It makes me cannot move ahead. And I often fogort to add an connection of the author's claim.
In the end of my essay, I think I did well in this part, because I often went back to the author's claim. I need to be careful that I cannot add an new experience and claim here.
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